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英语考研作文
小升初作文
时间：2010-10-10
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第一篇英语考研作文:考研英语作文有哪些写作要求
对于写作，每个同学都有自己的问题和疑惑，写作的分数看似难拿，其实也并非如此。小编为大家精心准备了考研英语作文写作要求，欢迎大家前来阅读。
考研英语作文三大写作要求
一、考研是目的性很强的考试，所以每一部分都是有标准的。那写作部分大家一定达到几方面的要求：
1、把握文章中心。作文是出题组想通过一幅图片或一个表格来体现我们对于某个现象，某种行为的理解以及解决之道。所以，文章的中心是首先需要大家谨慎以待的。偏离中心你的作文就是去了斗争资格。
2、文章脉络清晰。中心论点阐述完，需要论据进行支撑。论据部分要清晰明确，不是半包围或全包围的结构;且论据要有明确的分析角度，并不是一件事没完没了的论述。最后，衔接自然，清晰可见。
3、语言是文章的眼睛，透过眼睛可以看到你灵魂。那作文透过词汇可以看到各位的知识水平和语言的驾驭能力。所以，词汇这部分一定要多多积累，争取文章妙语横生，勇夺高分。
二、那我们以一篇文章为例写一篇范文，如下：
范文：
With the improved living standard, residents in an increasing number are fond of browsing the internet for shopping rather than wandering in the supermarkets just as the picture depicts. From what is shown, we can clearly notice the expenditure in online shopping rockets rapidly from...in... to...in...
There is no denying that the following factors should account for this phenomenon. To begin with, the updating process of science and technology makes it possible for consumers have various commodities with less money but with the same quality as those in the physical stores. And to be specifically speaking, as the ever-growing stress puts on our shoulders, we do not have so much leisure time, it is a time-saving process rather than a time-wasting one. And also, it can be defined as a course for relaxing and refreshing ourselves from our daily incidents.
It is a typical trait of the development of our society and economy, but on the other hand, it may bring about many potential damages to our physical industries. Therefore, effective measures should be set up and taken if necessary from the whole community.
文章需要不断的磨合，不断的修改，才会渐入正轨，看起来才是考研的文章。文章一定要深入浅出，让别人读起来朗朗上口。所以，没必要写太多的从句，非谓语动词等等。比如说小作文部分，三五个从句，三五个短语就足够用了。所以大家，要知道取舍之道，以免画蛇添足。
考研英语作文必备29句过渡句
1)To prevent this phenomenon/trend from worsening/running wide/To guide the matter/situation to the best advantage， it is necessary/important to……(可用于分析建议类、原因分析类等议论文)
2)In the face of……some people take the position that……/some people come to believe that……， to which I can"t attach/add my consent.(可用于批驳分析类议论文)
或：In the face of……people retain/take/show/assume different attitudes/position s/standpoints.(可用于各抒己见类议论文)
或：In the face of……many people have come up with……(可用于对比分析类议论文和知识性说明文等)
3)But many people feel puzzled about/perplexed at/over whelmed with……(the changes/situation)， so this essay is intended to……(可用于批驳分析类议论文和知识性说明文)
4)Although lots of people follow the fashion/trend， I still set my heart on……(可用于理由陈述类议论文)
5)To get a sense of how……we must turn first to causes for it/to what benefit(harm/problems/difference)it has brought to our society.(可用于分析建议和原因分析类议论文)
6)This is a(n)favorable/unfavorable/unhealthy/essential/marked/grateful change/tendency/situation， but factors/causes/reasons for it are not hard to find(或but its appearance/existence derives from a variety of factors)。(用于原因分析类议论文)
7)The progress/improvement/change(s)in……is(are)really tremendous/remarkable/prodigious/marvelous， so it is necessary to understand(see)what it(they)illustrate(s)/prove(s)/account(s)for.(用于原因分析类议论文和知识性说明文)
8)A comparison between these changes may be a good way to learn more about……(可用于对比说明文)
9)More insight/inspiration/truth/thought can be deduced from these changes.(可用于知识性说明文)
10)This situation/phenomenon/trend/tendency is rather distressing/disturb ing/depressing/heart-rending， for the opposite of it is just in line with our wishes/just what is to be expected.(可用于分析建议、批驳分析和原因分析等议论文)
11)In that case， however， I prefer to……rather than……(用于理由陈述、比较分析、批驳分析类议论文和知识性说明文)
12)This is what we are unwilling to see， so some way must be found out to……(可用于分析建议、对比分析、批驳分析类议论文和知识性说明文)
13)Fortunately， however， more and more people come/begin to realize that……(可用于分析建议、对比分析和各抒己见类议论文)
14)Unfortunately， things have worsened/come/developed to the point where……(用于分析建议、原因分析、批驳分析、各抒己见类议论文和知识性说明文)
15)But have you ever stopped to think what/how/why……?(可用于除理由陈述之外的各种议论文和知识性说明文)
16)If we take a further/colder/closer look at this problem/matter， however， more secrets/grounds/chances/ways will be found out for……
(e.g.……putting it right/taking action against it/improving it)(可用于分析建议、对比分析、原因分析等议论文和知识性说明文)
17)But this(dis)agreement ceases to exist as soon as……(用于各抒己见、批驳分析、对比分析等议论文和对比说明文)
18)A further/deeper analysis/study/exposure of……/A further comparison between……can reveal more about……/can show us more ways to……(how to……)可用于分析建议、原因分析、对比分析、批驳分析等议论文和对比说明文及知识性说明文)
19)If you push the analysis/study/argument/comparison/exposure further， you will see that……(用于分析建议、对比分析、批驳分析、各抒己见类议论文和对比说明文及知识性说明文)
20)The same is true of many cases in life.(用于举例说明文)
21)Now， let"s see what would happen to……in this case/light(或in different conditions/circumstances)。(用于分析建议类议论文和对比说明文)
22)Perhaps， it is ideal/high/ripe time for us to tackle/handle/answer/take up the question in no half-hearted manner.(用于分析建议、原因分析类议论文和知识性说明文)
23)To be frank， I have turned the question over and over in my mind， but found no reason to sidestep it;so here are my ways to……/my reasons for……(用于理由陈述类议论文和知识性说明文)
24)I was once cursed/perplexed/seized with this question， but I have forged/made my own way out of it.(用于知识性说明文)
25)People from different backgrounds， however， put different interpretations on the same thing.(用于各抒己见类议论文和展开式界说性说明文)
26)But different people hold completely different views as to its nature.(用于各抒己见类议论文和界说性说明文)
27)If/When adopted to account for/define/expose……， it can come in different meanings.(用于具体定义说明文)
28)If it is intended for……， however， the divergence of outlook on it ceases to continue while a new meaning to it begins to stand out.(用于归纳性定义说明文)
29)Our life abounds with examples in point.(或The truth in the definition goes for/is applicable to many cases in our life.)(用于举例说明文)
考研英语高分作文必备45个替换词
1、 individuals, characters, folks 替换 people ,persons.
2、 positive, favorable, rosy, promising, perfect, pleasurable, excellent, outstanding, superior 替换 good.
3.、dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill 替换 bad(如果bad做表语，可以有be less impressive替换。)
eg. An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.
4、an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of, a host of, many, if not most 替换 many.
注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有词。
Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that....同理，用most, if not all 替换 most.
5、 a slice of, quiet a few 替换 some.
6--10
6、 harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that 替换 think(因为是书面语，所以要加that)。
7、 affair, business, matter 替换 thing.
8、 shared 替换 common .
9、 reap huge fruits 替换 get many benefits.
10、 for my part ,from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion.
11--15
11、 Increasing(ly), growing 替换 more and more(注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.)
Eg. sth has gained growing popularity. sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.
12、 little if anything或little or nothing 替换 hardly.
13、 beneficial, rewarding 替换 helpful.
14、 shopper, client, consumer, purchaser 替换 customer.
15、 overwhelmingly, exceedingly, extremely, intensely 替换 very.
16、 hardly necessary, hardly inevitable… 替换 unnecessary, avoidable.
17、 indispensable 替换 necessary
18、 sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb take interest in / sb. be interested in.
19、 capture one"s attention 替换 attract one"s attention.
20、 facet, demension, sphere 替换 aspect.
21、 be indicative of, be suggestive of, be fearful of 替换 indicate, suggest ,fear.
22、 give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换 cause.
23、 There are several reasons behind sth 替换 …reasons for sth.
24、 desire 替换 want.
25、 pour attention into 替换 pay attention to.
26、 bear in mind that 替换 remember.
27、 enjoy, possess 替换 have(注意process是过程的意思)。
28、 interaction 替换 communication.
29、 frown on sth 替换 be against , disagree with sth .
30、 to name only a few, as an example 替换 for example, for instance.
31、 next to / virtually impossible 替换 nearly / almost impossible.
32、 regarding / concerning 替换 about.
33、 crucial /paramount 替换 important.
34、 第一(in the first place/the first and foremost);第二(there is one more point, I should touch on, that…);第三(the last but not the least).
35、 assiduous 替换 hard-working
36、 arduous 替换 difficult
37、 underdeveloped / financially-challenged 替换poor(因为poor通常含有贬义)
38、demonstrate / manifest 替换 show
39、 invariably 替换 always
40、 perilous / hazardous替换 dangerous(写社会类作文时常用，说什么社会现象是不好的，有害的)
41、 formidable 替换 difficult
42、 quintessential 替换 typical(举例时常用，例如：a quintessential example should be cited that=for example; for instance)
43、 distinguished 替换 famous
44、 feasible 替换 possible
45、 consequently, accordingly替换 so
第二篇英语考研作文:考研英语作文需要了解什么
考研英语作文要多拿分就得踩点得分，要踩点得分大家就必须熟悉评分的原则和方法。小编为大家精心准备了考研英语作文指南攻略，欢迎大家前来阅读。
考研英语作文要了解评分原则方法及分档点
考研作文考试内容
该部分由A、B两节组成，考查考生的书面表达力。总分25分。
A节题型有两种，每次考试选择其中的一种形式。备选题型包括：
1) 考生根据所给情景写出约100词(标点符号不计算在内)的应用性短文，包括私人和公务信函、备忘录、报告等。
2) 要求考生根据所提供的汉语文章，用英语写出一篇80~100词的该文摘要。考生在答题卡2上作答。共10分。
B节要求考生根据所规定的情景或给出的提纲，写出一篇150词以上的英语说明文或议论文。提供情景的形式为图画、图标或文字。考生在答题卡2上作答。共15分。
5大评分原则和方法
1. 虽然A、B两节的考查要点有所不同，但对考生写作能力的基本要求是相同的，所以一般评分标准对两节都适用。但根据两节不同的考查要点，评分时会有不同的侧重点。
A节：应用文的评分侧重点在于信息点的覆盖、内容的组织、语言的准确性及格式和语域的恰当。对语法结构和词汇多样性的要求将根据具体试题作调整。允许在作文中使用提示语中出现过的关键词，但使用提示语中出现过的词组或句子将被扣分。
B节：B节作文的评分重点在于内容完整性、文章的组织连贯性、语法结构和词汇的多样性及语言的准确性。
2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来给分。评分人员在档内有1--3分的调节分。
3. A节作文的字数要求是100词左右。B节作文的字数要求是150词。文章长度不符合要求的，酌情扣分。
4. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一方面。评分时，视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
5. 如书写较差，以致影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。
6大分档点
第五档：A节 (9-10分)B节 (17-20分)
l 很好地完成了试题规定的任务;
l 包含所有内容要点;
l 使用丰富的语法结构和词汇;
l 语言自然流畅，语法错误极少;
l 有效地采用了多种衔接手法，文字连贯，层次清晰;
l 格式与语域恰当、贴切;
l 对目标读者完全产生了预期的效果。
第四档：A节 (7-8分)B节(13-16分)
l 较好地完成了试题规定的任务;
l 包含所有内容要点，允许漏掉1、2个次重点;
l 使用较丰富的语法结构和词汇;
l 语言基本准确，只有在试图使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇时才有个别错误;
l 采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰，组织较严密;
l 格式与语域较恰当;
l 对目标读者产生了预期的效果。
第三档： A节 (5-6分)B节 (9-12分)
l 基本完成了试题规定的任务;
l 虽漏掉一些内容，但包含多数内容要点;
l 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的需求;
l 有一些语法及词汇错误，但不影响理解;
l 采用了简单的衔接手法，内容较连贯，层次较清晰;
l 格式和语域基本合理;
l 对目标读者基本产生了预期的效果。
第二档： A节(3-4分)B节(5-8分)
l 未能按要求完成试题规定的任务;
l 漏掉或未能有效阐述一些内容要点，写了一些无关内容;
l 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限;
l 有较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解;
l 未采用恰当的衔接手法，内容缺少连贯性;
l 格式和语域不恰当;
l 未能清楚地传达信息给读者。
第一档： A节(1-2分)B节(1-4分)
l 未完成试题规定的任务;
l 明显遗漏主要内容，且有许多不相关的内容;
l 语法项目和词汇的使用单调、重复;
l 语言错误多，有碍读者对内容的理解，语言运用能力差;
l 未使用任何衔接手法，内容不连贯，缺少组织、分段;
l 无格式与语域概念;
l 未能传达信息给读者。
零档(0分)
所传达的信息或所用语言太少，无法评价;内容与要求无关或无法辨认，列举一些“差作文”通常具备的“劣迹表现”：
l 无话可说，难以下笔;
l 文章安排，极不合理;
l 结构混乱，缺乏关联;
l 语言表达，错误众多;
l 用词贫乏，句式单一;
l 时间限制，无法完成;
l 字迹不清，影响阅卷。
考研英语小作文题目分析及模板分享
考研英语小作文题目汇总分析
纵观英语一和英语二，12类书信体出现频率各不相同，大家要备考的有方向、有重点。英语一已经考过的书信体包括辞职信1次、询问信1次、建议信4次、道歉信1次、告示1次、推荐信2次、邀请信1次;未考题型包括感谢信、祝贺信、慰问信、申请信、投诉信、介绍信、请求信。英语二已考过书信体包括感谢信1次、建议信2次、祝贺信1次、投诉信1次、倡议书1次、介绍信1次、询问信1次;未考过题型包括道歉信、慰问信、推荐信、邀请信、申请信、请求信。另外，去年英语二考的是通知，在考研史上开了另外一个先河。
经过分析后，大家在今年考研中要着重复习的就是未被考过的话题，其他考过的作为备考次重点。在这里仅以几篇范文模板作为大家写作参考方向。
1、道歉信：
Suppose you have accepted Mr. Zhang’s invitation to dinner, but you have to change your plan for some reasons. Write a letter inabout 100 words to make an apology to him.
Dear Mr. Zhang,
I sincerely thank you for inviting me to dinner in your house next Sunday.
However, now, much to my regret that I may not be able to keep my promise because I have just been caught serious cold, which requires me to take a rest for a long time. And I apologize for any inconvenience that may cause you. If I get better during this time, I will be there on time.
I am very sorry for that and really regret that I would miss such an excellent chance of enjoying the perfect dishes with friends. Besides, please give my regards to Mr. and Mrs. Rogers when they come to dinner.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
2、询问信：
Write a letter inquiring about a travel agency about the trip to Mount Huangshan. Some necessary details must be included. Donot sign your own name at the end of your letter, using “Li Ming” instead.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to travel to Mount Huangshan this summer. I would be most grateful if you could send me information regarding the following information concerned in your agency because my friend John spoke highly of your service.
My family will come with me. Therefore, I would like to know the details aboutthis trip, such as the accommodation, the plans and the money we will cost. By the way, how do you deliver these materials to me? What’s the deadline before we make the final decision? How do I pay for you?
Thank you for your attention, I am looking forward to your immediate response.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
3、申请信：
Directions:
You want to apply for the following job: a personal secretary to the general manager, write a letter to Mr. Byron to:
1) show your interest,
2) describe yourself, and
3) explain why you would be suitable for the job.
Dear Mr. Byron,
I am writing to apply for the position as the personal secretary to the general manager.
I am fully confident that I am the right candidate. To begin with, I major in secretary and will graduate from Peking University. I have a good academic performance in school and have been the top five students for four years in mygrade. In addition, I am an open-minded, cooperative and ready-to-help girl.
Enclosed is my resume to provide additional information. Thank you for your time and consideration. I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely，
Li Ming
考研英语作文经典话题素材大盘点
正直诚实
好处:
1、enable honest person to succeed in work and life. (获得成功)
2、to work honestly to attain one’s life goal. (实现人生目标)
3、to enhance reputation of a country.
坚持：(成功)
1、No accomplishment can be achieved in a short time, and success needs efforts.
2、Success is founded on the basis of patient pursuit +定语从句
Olympic game
好处：
1、it can be a tremendous momentum pushing the country’s development
2、When equipped with willingness, spurring people to overcome any difficulty and conquer any challenge.
献爱心
好处、意义：
1、Contributing money and other necessities to people in need is a goal way to express human love. It reflects the sense of social responsibility.
2、It also expresses a feeling from deep with one’s heart.
人生价值
该类别主要包括：创新、 勇气、 奋斗、 勤俭 、高瞻远瞩、 奉献、 浪费、 社会公德 、幸福观 、勇敢 、得与失、 正直诚实、 持之以恒 、拼搏的奥运精神 、读书。
1、To be fair and upright; honest person;
2、economical and simple life; to learn to be frugal;
3、success derives from persistence; Olympic motto, read more books
情感友谊、团队合作、让座 邻里、献爱心
1、show love; provide assistance to others; teamwork and cooperation; selflessly offering help
2、contributing money and other necessities to people who are in great need
Eager to donate money to charity
交流文化
该类别主要包括：中西方文化、 民族文化、 老外过春节 、老外学书法、 学英语、 城市发展与历史传承。
1、a balanced economic development is not necessarily accompanied by the sacrifice of history.
2、participating in the annual celebration of the Chinese spring festival
3、practicing Chinese calligraphy (书法)
4、cultural exchanges; acquire better understanding of each other;the traditional Chinese culture.
5、pass down culture habit and treasure; absorb and assimilate traditional culture; reserve and spread brilliant diverse culture; be under the threat of extinction; be in great danger
好处：
1、cultural exchanges can enhance international friendship.
2、people can acquire better understanding of each other.
3、can also greatly benefit the countries and stimulate their own social development and culture prosperity.
教育
1、in my opinions, there needs to be a comprehensive renovation in the educational system in which new educational concepts are introduced.
2、only by new teaching methods can we cultivate children into talents and elites who will meet the requirements of our society.
繁荣、人口问题、解决问题
1、thrive/boom/flourish/blossom
2、the awareness of struggling for one’s life is essential to the young man
3、parents indulge children in consumption with an objective outlook on money
身体健康、锻炼、心理问题、减肥
1、 to develop good health
2、 to keep regular exercise
3、 to make more contributions to the society
4、 to make do with bad diet
5、 to neglect sports and exercise
职业道德及素质类
该类别主要包括：虚假宣传、假冒伪劣产品、排队、鼓掌、文明言行、文明交通、谦虚、宽容、医患矛盾、药品回扣诚信、豆腐渣、家庭作坊卫生、跳槽与商业机密。
1、the sanitation problem of family workshops
2、the promise of one’s own responsibility is like a method of cheating, and is quit against professional morals(职业道德)
3、low-quality products
4、the ignorance of sanitation
5、short of occupational disciplines
6、the false commercial advertising and promotion
家庭关系
该类别主要包括：家庭关系、 养老、 啃老。
Young people are used to relying financially on their families
交通事故
Traffic accidents have long been a problem and are becoming a severe problem
原因：
1、many drivers are forced to drive days and nights
2、a lot of people drive after drinking alcohol
城市发展与历史传承
1、a balanced economic development is not accompanied by sacrifice of history.
2、historical sites are the treasure of our country’s glorious past. We must figure out a win-win method to promote sustainable development while retaining our cultural heritage.
工作就业前途
该类别主要包括：高薪、 加班、技能、学历、自立自强、创业。
1、to display talent and capability;
2、to be of real service to fellowmen and the country;
3、to feel guilty in front of parents and family supporters;
4、to encounter discrimination on the basis of sex or height or even birthplace;
5、to despise jobs of lower social status and less income;
6、to avoid the possibility of working in the rural areas
7、to find (search\hunt) the right career;
环境保护、动植物保护
该类别主要包括：保护森林、水污染、汽车尾气、沙尘暴、温室效应、节约资源、垃圾污染。
1、the exhaustion of resources;
2、pollution from industrial production transform many clean rivers into undrinkable water.
3、the convenience brought by cars, their harmful impact on the atmosphere.
4、garbage output, such as plastics and glass.
5、deforestation Global warming, current greenhouse effect remains out of control
6、human exploitation of natural resources
“问题”学生
该类别主要包括：教育、上网成瘾、上网交友、青少年犯罪、 个人隐私、出国留学、 知识学术欺诈、 望子成龙， 拔苗助长、 应试教育素质教育 、考试作弊 、相互攀比、 名牌、 浪费、 课业负担、 恋爱 、兼职 、占座、 8090后 、富二代、 校园旅游 、教育平等 、独生子女、 农民工子女、 创新 、迷信、 溺爱(spoiled)。
1、To concentrate limited resources on creative talents, or elite;
2、Enable students to possess better job skill;
3、prepare students for future employment;
4、to enhance the quality of population;
5、to promote scientific and technological level;
6、 to prepare one for a better and more meaningful life rather than a job;
7、one-child policy
8、migrant workers(农民工);
9、impartial education opportunities
10、overwhelming homework;
11、quality education(素质教育)
12、a comprehensive renovation
人口增长、 人口质量、养老与老龄化、 性别比例
1、population aging; outdated and abandoned; to improve the living condition of the aging population ; to respect and appreciate the aged; to provide safety and happiness
2、the number of males outweighs that of females;the population growth is almost out of control, the humans to live is increasingly circumscribed.
社会热点
该类别主要包括： 创建和谐社会、 学术**** 、可持续发展、 抗争救灾众志成城、 交通旅游 、国际化、 堵车 、宠物、 农业 、酒后/疲劳驾车 、黄金周旅游。
1、traffic jams(堵车);the successful launch of the shenzhou-6 spaceship, our national strength and scientific competency.
2、traffic accidents; drive days and night with little rest; drive after drinking alcohol
3、to keep domestic animals; to make family life more colorful and rich; to develop sense of responsibility and caring;
4、to make people feel closer to the natural world; to spread disease and pollute living environment; to waste time and money; to scare and hurt people, kid and the aged alike
法律等
该类别主要包括：合法致富、 经济发展、 科技发展、 网络、 电子交通、 传媒、 动车。
1、get rich by legal means; be entitled to wealth and prosperity; stimulate people into hard working; reduce the gap;
2、help the poor with better opportunities; make big money illegally; make this society insecure
网络好处：1、share individual viewpoints and insights; enable better and more efficient interpersonal communication;
2、enjoy equal right t personal opinion; 网络坏处：1、reveal and spread rumors; occupy and waste net space; follow trend and fashion; ( help distinguish between right and wrong;
2、offer proper guidance; check and restrict unhealthy content; create a clean and safe environment; mislead children by indecent content.
第三篇英语考研作文:考研英语作文练习题目及优秀范文
Section V Writing
Directions:
[A] Study the following set of pictures carefully and write an essay in no less than 120 words.
[B] Your essay must be written clearly on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)
[C] Your essay should cover all the information provided and meet the requirements below:
1. Interpret the following pictures.
2. Predict the tendency of tobacco consumption and give your reasons.
参考范文
例文一
We meet smokers everywhere: in the streets, on college campuses and in shops. There are 5.8 billion people in the world, and the smokers are about 1.1 billion, which makes up 20 percent of the worlds total population.
Smoking is very harmful. I think there are two main aspects to the damage. First, smoking consumes a great deal of money. As is shown in the pictorial graph, smoking wastes 200 billion dollars each year in the world. Second, smoking does harm to the health of smokers, and it is the main cause of lung cancer. About 3 million people die because of the relevant diseases derived from smoking every year.
Because more and more people are aware of the great harm of smoking to humans, the amount of tobacco consumption is on the decrease. From the following figures we can clearly see the tendency. The total amount of world tobacco production added up to 14.364 billion pounds in 1994, but it dropped to 14.2 billion pounds in 1995. At the same time, many countries call on people to give up smoking. So it is certain that the number of smokers is to decrease.
例文二
About Tobacco Consumption
From the above set of pictures, we can see that there were a total of 14.364 billion pounds of tobacco produced in 1994 and 14.2 billion pounds in 1995. Because the amount of tobacco production is falling yearly, it can be predicted that the tendency of tobacco consumption would also be falling yearly. There are many reasons. Firstly, smoking wastes money. Every year there are two hundred billion dollars burnt in the cigarette fire. Secondly, smoking would hardly do people any good and it can even cause cancer. Every year there are three million people buried in the cigarette tomb.
Although tobacco consumption is falling, there are too many people who smoke. The population in the world is 5.8 billion, but about twenty percent of the population, that is to say 1.1 billion people, smoke. So the situation is serious and the movement against smoking is still a difficult task.
评语：上边两篇作文内容符合要求, 包括对各图的说明, 对趋势的预测及理由,数字表达正确, 语言较好, 表达能力较强, 长度符合要求。得14分
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